Having saying some words abouts girls in my previous post about girls, I now have a totally different side of girls…….
I was going to Delhi. It was the first time I was going there. I was all excited and thus, I reached the railway station 45 mins early!!!( do I regret it now?).
The train was ready at the platform(because it started from Bhopal where I boarded it) as if it was waiting for me. I went to my boogie( I hope the spelling is correct)-went straight to my seat and put my luggage under the seat. A girl of about my age was sitting with her father.
I went out of the train to talk to my mother.She was afraid of me loosing my train even if I had 30 mins to talk to her. I somehow managed to stop her from not letting me be with her, outside the train.
It was time now for the train to leave the station. I went in and sat on my seat.
After a while a girl came and sat just in front of me. Few seconds later her father came and sat beside me and I started looking out from the window( I was sitting on the window seat).It was all dark outside but I still looked out to avoid any eye contact or any glare on the girl because of her father sitting next to me(I don’t know why I tend to this always 
).
They had their food. They had one ticket on the waiting list. Nevertheless I thought logically the girl would sleep on the confirmed one
The T.C came, I showed him my ticket and also the girls father did the same. He asked if there is any vacancy so that he can get a confirmed berth to sleep, but the T.c replied negatively and rightly so because the train was overcrowded.
Time passed by and it was about time to have some sleep. I went to my berth,adjusted my luggage and took out a book to read.As I was reading ,the girl climbed to the berth above mine because that was their confirmed seat.
Soon after, her father came and asked the girl to come down and did something surprising. He climbed the berth and slept.
The girl was sitting , nobody to talk in a crowded train where people were sleeping on the floor and the one who was supposed to take care of her was sleeping.
She was sitting on a little space provided by one of the passengers sleeping. She was sitting alone and possibilities were rare that she gets one berth to sleep.
really unrealistic…….needs improvement.
By: vishesh on May 18, 2008
at 2:53 pm
the thought of writing it came to me because it was unrealistic…….the whole thing was happening in front of my eyes and even then it seemed unrealistic…..
thnx for the comment anyways
By: parthwalunjkar on May 18, 2008
at 2:55 pm
Oh unfortunate incident. Well written.
By: Purvi on May 18, 2008
at 5:46 pm
@purvi..
thnx for comment
By: parthwalunjkar on May 18, 2008
at 6:19 pm
Hmmm….after reading these comments, and reading it for the 3rd time, I finally got the incident.
I guess there may b some reasons for his father acting in dis way. May be he was unwell, or physically weak. Or may be he was soo tired.
In any case, can you tell me how long the girl was sitting alone there?
Nice post indeed.
By: Intutius on May 19, 2008
at 4:16 am
@intutius
thnx for the comment bro….
and for the father being ill or something….i dont think he was ill. may be he was tired but in the end he was the father who should be caring for her daughter…the girl should not be left alone i think…..
she was sitting alone about whole night because thre was no seat in the train till the last station that is delhi
By: parthwalunjkar on May 19, 2008
at 9:14 am
ohh…in that case i am on the girl’s side. and yes i do agree that its an unfortunate incident.
By: Intutius on May 19, 2008
at 11:06 am