Proposal??

This was the first class for the year and as expected there were few ‘new admissions’. In fact there were only two new comers-both boys. Priyanka noticed it and also noticed one of them was coming towards her. The boy took the seat behind her.

“umm…excuse me!” came the voice from behind.

“yeah?” Priyanka asked.

“i am new here and don’t know what is our time table. Will you please tell me?”

She took out her diary and gave it to him.”last page” she told him the exact location.

“Priyanka Dixit.”, he murmured. Till now Priyanka had turned her head towards the board, but still she heard her name being murmured. But, she didn’t respond.

“Thanks Priyanka”, and he returned her diary.”I am Rakesh. Wanna be friends?”

“yeah .sure! Priyanka.”

“yeah I know. Read your name on the diary.” And they shook hands.

……………………………………………………………………………………………………………

Days passed by and they became good friends. They both came to know that they lived nearby and they had many interests same. Priyanka started having a feeling for Rakesh and Rakesh also liked her. They both enjoyed each others company in the class and outside the school. Rakesh was intelligent and thus he helped Priyanka in studies.

It was a nice evening. Cool wind blowing and the sun about to set. Priyanka was looking out of the window and she saw Rakesh on his bike standing outside her house.

Rakesh screamed” Come. lets go for a ride!!”

“OK. Just wait. I will come.”

“ok!!”

Priyanka knew that she can go out because she had only her younger brother in her house. She told her that she has some extra classes.

She didn’t wanted to miss this chance. She thought”may be he will propose me” and went downstairs smiling.

She sat on his bike and they vrooomed to the dam nearby.

“OH! How romantic?”, thought Priyanka. She thought her wish is coming true. They were both sitting on a rock when Rakesh said”I will come in a minute. You wait right here. I will be back.”

He smiled and went somewhere. Priyanka was all alone.

She started thinking about the day she met Rakesh and went into the flash-back of her life spent with him. She thanked god for bringing Rakesh into her life.

She saw Rakesh coming towards her with some flowers. Her heart started beating. She knew this was it.

Rakesh came to her and said, “Poor child. She was selling these flowers and I bought just to get her something to eat.”

” I know you wont tell me that you bought them for me.”, Priyanka thought in her mind.

One minute silence. No one talked and then Rakesh took a deep breath.

“Priyanka. I wanted to ask you something.”

“yeah. go on”, she said smiling.

“ummm……see whatever you think of this just please don’t be angry.”

“OK. Tell me first. I wont be angry.”

This was enough for Rakesh and he proposed.

“Will you be my……..”

“Say it Rakesh!!” she was desperate to here it.

“ohk ohk ..ya.ummm….ok.” he closed his eyes.”will you be my uhh umm SISTER?”

PS:NOT inspired from a real life story.

PS:IDEA came into my mind thru a conversation.

PS:DON’T try this at home :P

8 Comments »

  1. Intutius Said:

    abey hadd kar di yaar………phaaaaduuuuuuuuuu..!!!

    Our conversation turned into such a beautiful outcome….hahaha

    ”will you be my uhh umm SISTER?” hahahaha

    Can’t imagine what was the condition of Priyanka…lol

  2. vish Said:

    lolzzz
    can’t stop laughing.now dis is d biggg one.
    dis should be telecasted in d television as an advertisement of rakhshabandan .
    hahahha

  3. all I could of while reading the post was:

    a) I hope it has a good ending
    b) y sis she pick the boys name to be RAKESSSSSSSSSSSS

    heehhehhe

    this was a nice one… enjoyed…

    A lil suggestion.. work on ur tenses and sentence constructions… ur basic idea was great but a lil bad language just breaks the mood of the read…
    :-)

    hope to read more form u.

  4. parthwalunjkar Said:

    @intutius
    lol….thnx for having that conversation wid me …hehhe….

    @VISH
    u know any TV person someon who can promote this on TV lolz…..i will not play the lead anyways :P

    @priyanka
    so here is priyanka!!! lol just kidding…
    hmmm…i was worried about the tenses and all….thnx that u caught me……i wil work on the language part more now…….
    keep reading and very very thnx for commenting……
    keep reading :)

  5. amitsinha Said:

    hahahha..quite humerous..

  6. the insider Said:

    waaaaaaaatttt……!!!!!

    well…the ending….was something that I expected…really…
    sister..ahem..ahem..!!

    u shud work on ur sentence formation…( n read my blog n correct me too, if required.!!)
    a gud one though…!!!!

    keep writing
    :)

    ps: why did u delete the previous post???

  7. parthwalunjkar Said:

    @amitsinha
    thnx for the comment…..

    @the insider
    ur prediction tells me that i can at least match ur thinking :P (even if its once)
    thnx for that suggestion about the sentences…i will surely keep that in my mind.

    for the previous post deletion ……….the thinking changed dramatically after some incidences in my life …so why promote wat i dont think ?? :)

    keep reading and giving suggestions….:)

  8. Vee Said:

    lol..
    parth dude, looks like ur Rakesh is one big nerd.


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