DO READ THE FIRST PART IF HAVE NOT. READ IT HERE
Firstly, there was a formal introduction and then the informal talk.
The three men went on to talk till the midnight about Manav’s past. They would have talked more but time didn’t permit them. Dr.Kapoor asked Manav to meet him the next day in his clinic.
Manav went to office and while coming back to his house went to the doctor. But, to his surprise and misfortune, the doctor was was not at his clinic!! Manav was returning back to his scooter disappointedly but just then he heard a voice.
“Excuse me!!!”
Manav turned back to the beautiful voice of a girl.
“yes please?” Came a shocked reply.
“Are you Manav?”
“yes, yes I am.”
“Dr.Kapoor told me about you.I’m his assistant, Prerna. I’m sorry he didn’t inform you, but he left for Delhi for something urgent.”
“OK. So, you are now going to handle my case.”
“yes”, came a short reply.
“OK. Then what should I do ?”
“Lets go somewhere where we can sit and talk.”
“OK.why not my house?”
“OK. sure.”
Both went to Manav’s house and talked about the destructive past. Prerna left in the evening before his uncle came.
Manav was having a feel of confidence after the talk. He just ate and slept.
Many days had passed. Prerna still came and talked. Manav became more confident than he was some days before. The talks were working good for Manav’s confidence.
One routine day he came back from his office and parked his scooter in the parking. The same “BAD” boys who stopped and took his money some days ago were waiting for him to come.
“Hey !!!YOU!!COME HERE…” One of them screamed.
Manav went there.
“Gimme the money.”
“But why” Manav protested.
“HA HA HA HA HA. He is asking questions to me!!!”, saying this he caught Manav’s collar.
But this time Manav had different plans. He just hit the boy on the nose with utmost power. The nose was bleeding and Manav knew he had put his foot on the axe. But, his uncle came there and took him away in time. He went home along his uncle.
He was feeling better and was undergoing sudden changes after he met Prerna. He was thankful to her and also to Dr.Kapoor, whom he had not met for a considerable time.
One day on the phone he asked Prerna about meeting Dr. Kapoor. Prerna said, “He has come. You can meet him.”
“ya ..ok…I’ll meet you there. bye.”
The next day he went to Dr.Kapoor’s residence. Dr.Kapoor asked Manav,
” Why didn’t you come to meet me ?”
Manav was shocked.
“you went to delhi. I went to your clinic which was closed”
“OH!!…I forgot everything. My clinic has been shifted and that building is yet to be sold…” and he continued”….but who told you that I went to delhi??”
“Prerna…”
“who Prerna??” Manav was surprised.
“your assistant. She told me that you went to delhi and that she will handle my case. I thought she would be coming here also. I just came here to thank you about it.”
“But I keep no assistant.!! I don’t know who the hell met you.”
Both were surprised but Manav was more surprised than Kapoor.
He went to all the places to find Prerna, but couldn’t find her.
‘WHO WAS ThiS MYSTERIOUS GIRL???’
Days passed and he wasn’t able to find her. But he was a fine person now. A confident human being.
One day he was looking at the albums of the times of his father and mother’s young hood when he noticed a girl who was certainly noticeable. She resembled Prerna. He asked about the girl but Mahesh gave him a surprising but somewhere satisfying answer.
“She is Savita, your mother,son.”
PS:waiting for your comments.
PS: wish I get a good colg


[...] PS:read more in part 2 [...]
By: The Confidence….. « Outlooking life on July 28, 2008
at 5:13 pm
haha… nice1
By: abhi on July 28, 2008
at 5:21 pm
nice… its got an indian touch to it…
By: Perx on July 28, 2008
at 5:26 pm
Very nice man…..you wrote it like a PRO…..!
IT seemed I was flown in story for a while.
nice concept……unexpected ending…..all made it more interesting.
Good work.
By: Intutius on July 29, 2008
at 3:45 am
its just owesome .ending is above my xpectation.Really u r having “great writer keeda” inside ur brain.ur imangination is tooo good.all hats off to u,
thats d only thing i would like say.
By: vishakha on July 29, 2008
at 11:15 am
Woow, woow…it is so good
….the ending is the best part [though i was eXpecting smthing else
hehe
Keep Writting..!!
By: sahiti on July 29, 2008
at 12:18 pm
@abhi
..thnx bro…
@Perx
…lol yeah …thnx ..keep reading
@intutius
…. well i will try myself to be as good as a PRO
thnx bro….i m glad that u called me PRO…
@vishaka
thnx ….
thank you sooo much for this wonderful comment…”great writer keeda ” hahahahahaha…….i wish that stays in my brain forever
keep reading
@sahiti
..thnx for reading and appreciating it
i thought the ending would be expected one….but looks like it wasn’t…
By: uNbReAkAbLe on July 29, 2008
at 5:28 pm
hmmmmmmmmmmm really nice
By: bishwajeet on July 30, 2008
at 11:50 am
OMG..I had goosebumps..partly due to story n partly due to cold.
nice indeed…keep wirting!
By: enchantinganki on August 10, 2008
at 10:14 am
@bishwajeet
thnx buddy !!!
@enchantinganki
thnx for reading ….and yes take care..
By: uNbReAkAbLe on August 11, 2008
at 8:31 am